Wednesday, June 26, 2013

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Merry-go-around

1.horses on poles.
2.big tent-like cover.
3.the poles were shiny golden.
4.the bottom was turning but it wasn't a wheel
5.it plays music while it's turning.
6.it costs 2$ for each ride.
7.each horse is different in colors and shapes.
8. The ride lasts 3-4 minutes long.
9.it's inside the mall of concord mill.
10. We went there in the morning of Saturday with Grandpa.
11. there are mostly kids under 10 who ride it.
12. one of the horses was all green and scaly. It had a long fish tail.
13. there is a sign saying that kids under 3 has to ride with there parents.
14. I don't feel excited because I'm too old for that but my little brother Aiden loves it.
15. When I ride on it, sometimes I feel dizzy.
16. I saw some kids has a big smile on their faces and they ask their parents if they can go again., some kids crying because they are scared.
17. There are about 30 horses
18. They are seat belts on the horse.
19. There is a horse on the top of the tent.
20.  There are mirrors in the center and I can see myself.

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